This is a little hard to read because the sentences seem to jump and words appear to be missing. Otherwise it is a good story.

Kita! What have I told you about listening to the men in the white lab coats? DON'T! Slice off their tounges and cook them! They go well in chilli!

Now that I've got that out of my system, on to commenting on the story! You wrote extra thing s in with out telling me? I'm hurt! I'm supposed to get to see all the story before every one else. Don't make me cry at you. By the way this chapter is very good. You get a virtual cookie. Enjoy.

I read it all so far. It is really great

What is wrong with you, author?

I can understand the Duo x Hilde pairing.

I can understand the Heero x Relena pairing (even though she is annoying).

I can understand the Milliardo x Lucretzia pairing.

I can even understand the Wufei x Sally pairing (Even though she must have at least 8 or more years on him. Hey, she was a doctor, she had to be at least in the mid to late 20's. Doctor and military training, you know.)

And (even though I don't like it) I can stand the Quartre x Dorothy pairing.

But why did you pair Trowa with Catherine. Are you trying to say that incest is okay with you?

I know that this is fiction but get your facts straight.

If you did any research into Gundam Wing, you would know that Trowa and Catherine are brother and sister. They even have in the magna that they are brother and sister. She said on the show that Trowa was her brother.

Trowa's real name is Triton Bloome. He and his sister were separated during an attack when he was a really small child. He lost his memory of who he is. Both of their parents were killed. She was raised by the circus and he was raised by mercenaries.

Dear Kitahoshi,

Mmmmmmmmm, cookie dough! By the way, I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number I still need your number.

your partner in crime (Who still needs your number)

Niome-Chan

Anou... *scratch head* Is it just me? I'm totally confused. And it's just the 2nd chapter...

I think it'll really help if you don't add all your new charas at once. Give each a seperate section, let us see into their charas before you have them all get together. Too much info overload for me, sorry! I'm not very good w/ new charas cuz there's just too many to keep straight. blah!

And you made 1xR _divorce_? Are you NUTS? *wails* Ah, well, it's your fic, but still... *sniffle* 1xR forever, dangit. 9

Hi! I had some spare time so I decided to check out your fic. It's interesting, your first line is catchy. 9

You have me curious about Harley, but you also leave me w/ all these questions. I'm thinking the cloaked figure is Heero? And how old is Harley? Hopefully they'll be answered soon.

I think it'll be easier to read if you put spaces between your sentences, it's not a big problem, but easily fixable and it would enhance the enjoyment for you readers. Hope this helps!

Bwahahahahahaahhahaha to all of you how read this story . You may think its interesting but NOT WHEN YOU HAVE A BEST FREING HOW PUTS YOU IN WITH GRAIG . *steam * so anyway I know whats going to happen next something expected , something to do with Mic- um I mean Kita- I mean Ruth *nervous* .

Dear Kitahoshi

Isn't my Daddy great! He's nice enough to help me chase you around! Anywayz I've forgiven you for that. But I'm not sure I can't maintain this state of temporary sanity so watch out! Of course Daddy will never forgive you for this so there will still be someone chasing you around. Is'nt he the greatest! And yeah I know I'm a Daddy's girl, SO WHAT? I like it just fine. Although I usually switch between this and a Mother's girl. I'm a suck either way and I igmit it! I'll be watching Wue-Fei chasing you around.

Sincerly

Niome

That was sooo cool! I would have never come up with somrthing like that! The endings are all funny too. I would love to know if Craig and Megan kiss!Awwww, young love...

SOOOOOOOOO I had to use it untill I can remember Umis last name okay !

What the hell r u doing setting me up with Craig R u Insane ! Go Niome use the pitch Fork ! He's soooo annoying and you made me soud weak !

Dear Kita,

I'd like to express my highest morall uprage and start this off with I HATE YOU! YOU SET ME UP WITH A GUY THAT I ONLY MET ONCE BOFORE AND JUST SO HAPPENS TO BE MY BEST FRIENDS OLDER BROTHER!

YOU START THINGS OFF WITH HIM JUST ABOUT BLOWING ME UP WHILE PEOPLE ARE LOCKED UP IN OTHER ROOMS, WE GET INTO AN ALL OUT FIGHT SCENE, HE PINS ME TO THE GROUND, AND THEN, AND THEN HE HAS THE NERVE TO KISS ME! To all the other people reading this, hello faithfull viewers. If you are wondering, yes, Niome is a real person who is really P. at the moment. She co-wrote this story and put herself up to alot of things that could ruein her reputation as a charictor, but SHE STILL DOES THIS TOO ME! Antwayz, Kita, prepare to be jabbed with a pitchfork tomorrow by a certain annoied Gundiam piolts daughter.

Your partner in crime

Niome

Really interesting story! Continue! .

I forgot to review on the 11th chapter. That's why it probably says chapter 1 review or something. But too let u know this is a good story so far. Keep going. At first it was a little confusing but I got the idea. Thanx for explaining what happened with the parents. I thought it was a little sad and all but it was good none the less. After one of the next chapters you write put at the top or something the names of the children and whose they are (just for helpful purposes). It's just a suggestion u don't have to do it or anything. Anyways keep writing. I can't wait to read the next one. Ja! :) Sorry this isn't a signed review but I didn't feel like signing in. Besides I don't have any stories up yet and I'm not sure if I'm going to put any up or not. *tear*. oh well bye