Really really sad! Poor Jordan!

Lovely work.

Beautifully touching. Eva's failure was wonderful in both cases, and so poignant. The idea was also gorgeous, of her wanting to catch and save and God knows what else, but trying to stop people saving her although that's what she wants because she loves them so much. I love it.

Sad, but touching and beautiful. I love it.

Sad, but the description I could understand was brilliant and the words exchanged were so touching. Poor Molly.

Really sad but really beautiful. Cousin, you truly outdone yourself.

So sad, but touching. I loved Eva in this, trying to protect everyone but herself.

Really sad, stunning. Beautiful.

Really cute, but so sad. Eva needs to realise she can't protect everyone. ;_;

This was so sad. T^T

I love it.