That was simply beautiful.
There are no other words for it than that.
beautiful.

Wonderfully written and well done.

One of the best pieces I have read in a while.

you broke my heart! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

DEAR swety

first of all DOMO ARIGATO GOSAIMASHITA for R&R ^_^
now back to your questions

1.winder it is a typo [one more that i hadnt noticed] it wasnt on purpose
2.Ami and Michiru are not related, she was just reading the book i the library and googled the Kaioh name to see if the book was actually true, so she found out that the Stradivarius was still in Kaioh family's possession.
3.the poster was new and it was for michiru's upcoming concert, the scene happened in sailor moon days before the third season. i let Ruka out because it might me a sequel of this story ;)
4.the goddess didnt say she will take it easy on her, she said "I shouldn’t hurt her that much…" [were the last words she said before she looked at the frail figure one last time, for this lifetime.]
she actually didnt look at Human-ruka any more. and of course she was jealous of michiru she made that clear ;)

5. as for the "Yeah right, as if" lol thats why it is called fiction :P hehe, as for michiru, she the girl of a prophecy so she is not ordinary,
and she had some psychic power i guess, i didnt say anything about it but still think about her as a bit magical as well, i dont think she had the luck of the world when she lost her mommy, or that her tenshi was just hidden.
as for her musical skills, well im a musician and i have seen a lot of talented musicians all these years, i mean there is a girl in my band she plays the flute, but she is the ultimate artist, she plays the piano and guitar without lessons and she even composes, and when she started playing she didnt even know how to read notes, she also draws amazingly good.
michiru is an exceptional violinist in manga and anime, a five year old michiru could be talented enough to try make simple sounds with her violin, then again she started lessons just few months after she had her violin.
^_^

thats all i hope i made those points clear enough.
thanks again for read and review me ^_^

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Sad bittersweet ending! though I noticed you kept writing 'winder' instead of 'winter'. Was it on purpose? As a sort of ... I dunno, foreshadowing of sorts...? or was it just a coincidence?

Anyway I loved the story, wish there was a more definite happily ever after and does it mean that Ami and Michiru are related? I mean they are, probably, but are they distant relatives, both living nowadays? or is it some ancient poster that she saw or something like that? Cause it suggests that she was re-incarnated and so on but it says nothing of Ruka. By the way didn't the goddess say she'll take it easy on her? How is letting her die a year from when she loses her wings being nice on the kid? Grr! Meanie! She was probably jealous that they did it again I tellz ya!

But the stuff with baby Michi and her as a tot and all was just adorable. But at some point I was like "Yeah right, as if" cause it was a bit unbelievable how she would have not only all the luck in the world but also all the crazy skills at 5, without any practice. It was just a bit OTT. I mean I could buy her having some universal knowledge, or like looking at Ruka and inside, knowing that she knows her from somewhere, like that feeling of De Ja Vou people get, but I couldn't really believe the whole "Oh hey, I know you! I saw you when I was in the womb! Oh you're a she angel huh? I'll call you Prince, MWAH!" bit.

Other than that stuff and a few other stuff that bugged me, I reckon it was great. Gj, keep up the good work.

Aw, how sad. Ruka-chan died and Michi followed.

Although by the looks of it they probally got reancairnated.

By they way. Couched, do you mean coughed as well as couching as coughing?

aw.. so sad.. poor michi.. T_T that goddess universia i hate her.. its all her fault.. -sob- but i like the ending.. can you PLEASE make a sequel so michiru and haruka can be together but i will love it if you make universia appear agin.. SEQUEL plz..

Such a tragic ending. you made me cry!

very sad

that was good, is there gonna be a sequel to this story?

The end of this story is my favorite part. Nice way to tie it to the Sailor Moon universe. ^_^

Why didn't I read this before. This is your best fanfic I've read by you.

Can't wait for next chappie.

Ja ne

the story of a falling angel, neh?

Great chapter. Like how Michi was learning the violin and her melodies were becoming sadder since Ruka would not reveal herself to Michi any more. Loved how Michi had a realization of why Ruka wasn't coming and how she could get Ruka to come. Cute how Ruka would not look at Michi when she was naked. Loved how Ruka was not able to resist getting closer to Michi while listening the new song she created for her. Liked how Michi knew that Ruka was there. Liked how Ruka finally revealed herself to Michi on the day Michi finished her piece. Loved how Michi knew exactly what she wanted from her tenshi. Liked how Michi managed to make love to Ruka and how her name came to her when ruka was getting ready to climax. Liked how Ruka told Michi she loved her. Laughed at how Michi's dad was just happy she was happy and how he didn't even comment about the state she was in when he came in. Poor Ruka having no clue what she did to lose her purity. Can't wait for the next chapter.

thnx for the update, can't wait for the next chapie...At last they made love, but poor Haruka's getting punished...pls update soon again...j'a ne!