Another good look into a character's mindset, and it made me miss first-season Lana and her issues with Nell.

I really like this story too. You really captured not only Lana (especially Season 1 Lana), but the love/hate relationship she has with her aunt. And the last line was a great send-off.

This was a nice treat.

Your story sucks, really.

Very nice. You write Lana really well. I can definitely empathize with what she's feeling. You should write more Smallville stuff!

Really great story. )

PLEASE WRITE MORE.