it's really nice! :)

and a bit different from the real game since Ashley's father are not able to see D, only Ashley and the Captain does...

keep writting!

Great story! I loved the game, and I love this too. This is how it should have ended!

Beautiful. D is one of the most endearing characters I've ever come across. I love that you wrote the ending scene. It makes me feel light and airy inside. :)

Oh God, this story was awesome! Are you going to make a sequel? Why oh why must they always drive aprt the best couples?

I'm dramatic, I know. But I love this game so much!

Can you tell me a bit more about the Trace Memory sequel? PLease?