o i never read this.
idon't normally like lash
but i liek your writing.
was very good.

Haha. This was cute, but still not. Okay, young Lash was cute, but how others treated him was horrible. That Billy kid seriously needs to be smacked!

This is a very interesting insight into Lash's character and his personal reasons for turning into a bully himself. No one's immune to the ol' lack of self-esteem and all that psychological baggage. But I think what makes it even more fascinating is the fact that, while the "normals" accept the Supers, the latter are still treated like freaks who should be locked away. So, a great insight into the two-faced human nature.

this is really good
i like it...

wo. i love lash. i can't wait to see what else you have in store for him. xD keep it up.