This is a really well written story. It could have been gorier but hey, that's just me. Some people find what you have here sick, I find it more... Precious. Sorry.

I love this one so much! I really loved the beginning the most, with the short sentences, and then the *squeak*. It really made me smile, haha. You're amazing at keeping Johnny IC ]

Maybe I'm just in a weird mood, but I am SO nautious right now. I don't know why. Anyway, this was really good. There was something...so sinister about it. I mean it IS sinister, but you jacked up the volume, full force. This OOZED creepiness. Wow.

For some reason, the stuff about a slave, and Johnny's talk with that girl...goddamnit, I payed good money for that cheeseburger!

*grins* I can so see Nny watching The Metamorphosis. Very IC and Jhonen-like, but not a copy. Quite cool, kudos.

Very good story! Wonderfully in character.. I can so relate to it.. you know why humans are so stupid? All the blood that's supposed to be in their brains is down fueling.. grr.. I hate people. So STUPID. Johnny is my best friend.

Ohh...that was really, really good. Johnny was really in character, and the killings...*eye twitches dangerously* Hehehe. All in all, it was an excellent fic.

*mouth hanging open and eyes wide*...uhhhh...wow...ummm...me like...alot...yep...very deep...thats all I can say right now...