actually, i like the obi-wan/luminara pairing!

That was sweet. Actually, it didn't come as a suprise.

So (sniff) touching! How do you do that? I tell my stories to my friends, and they don't cry or laugh or show any emoition at all! Well, I suppose a writer never gives away her secrets. I'll just have to find out myself!

Yes, that pairing was quite a surprise! I thought that this was so cute :D Great work as always.

And...I owe you a gigantic, enormous, and nonetheless HUGE apology for not having been around. I've been working, doing school, getting college applications doine, and practicing my instrument like crazy for college auditions. I promise you I'm going to finish my story for you, and I promise you that I will be coming on more.

I love and miss you, and may the Force be with you!

Anara S.

That was sweet! I did predict the pairing. I've never actually heard the song, but I think that the lyrics were applied very well here. Good job! : )

Lol. I knew which pairing it was as soon as I read "LoveFic". :P This was a nice one-shot. Well done!

AW!

Great job, Paddy! I liked how you defined the emotion in the story!

Keep up da good work!

-miks