Really good story*if your going 2 continue it* keep going, if not then it was raelly good><

Love. Love, love, love!

I don't think you should change a thing. Your Stein/Marie stories are my favorite--I've definitely been inspired by you. :D They're amazingly in-character, too. This latest chapter just proves that.

I don't...I don't really know what else to say. I just hope you keep writing. XD

like it

OH YES :D!

Oh dear. Well that should be an...interesting chapter.

And that last line, with the inanity, was beautiful.

Oh Stein, you have no tact. Even when they look a mess, you tell hem they don't. But, he wouldn't know that, would he?

Oh, poor Stein. XD I had happy thoughts at those episodes too. ^^ So awesome. XD

I love Marie. XD Poor Stein. XD She's going to make him adjust to a regular schedule, goddamit, if it's the last thing she does! And plants. ^^ And girly magnets. XD And coffee and blankets. The last two which he could do with some more. ^^

Story if luff, yet again.

WOW! This story is amazing! I don't care if Stein was OOC, it was so wonderful! You are really good at writing Stein x Marie! Thanks for the great story!

O.O! please i beg you...go on! i thought Stein wasn't really meaning something but now that i see he has surprised both Marie and me hahahah that sounds weird but your very good narrating these types of scenes. I hope you have a new chapter soon!

*faints from the beauty radiating off of this chapter* Thank you for the wonderfully written chapter. I like the dialogue and your characterization of these two. You make both Stein and Marie come to life; 3-D even. I loved this chapter and all the previous chapters before. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful treasure. =]

"Get out of your towel."

Ah. That's going to make me smile for a while!
Keep up the good work!

God, that was hot. Well, what it leads up to, anyway.
Hey, guys like Stein have urges, too. x]

Ah. I love these...well written. :D

Okay...so maybe it's out of character...maybe it's not! Maybe this could happen...maybe. Okay, the important thing is, sometimes we need to read things like this!

I wish I could give "a well rounded critique" but I'm too insanely happy from reading this to do that! Cause that was kinda hot. And I don't mind that, frankly! Improve by writing more of it, I say!

So nice! So well-written! I eagerly await the next installment!

I love this. Especially the first chapter - you really get into the characters, don't you? I like it a lot. Hoping for an update soon!