 sg-1fanintn 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Finally got to read this last night (I've been saving SG holiday fic for this week!), and I really enjoyed it. It's fluffy and fun and happy and S/J...so of course, I adore it!
I don't always get back to leave reviews (although I try), but I love your S/J stuff! Please keep it coming.
I have you on alert, and I also think it's nice that you write for multiple ship fandoms. Either you're a multi-shipper, or you just believe in giving all of the people what they want.
Happy New Year! |
 VisualIDentificationZeta 2008-12-22 . chapter 1funny little ditty, but Jack painting Sam's toe-nails? Talk about emasculated... What's he gonna do next? Braid her hair? Start wearing women clothing and demand people call him 'Loretta'? Paint his own nails?
I normally love your work, but you seriously wrote him OOC in this one. Jack isn't gay, not one of those weirdoes who dress in women clothes, he's not one of those who are confused about their own sexuality, Jack's a manly man, who knows he's a man, likes to be a man, and also acts like a manly man. If he's got any estrogen in his body at all it's from Sam's saliva from when they were kissing; otherwise it's just testosterone.
The premise of the fic (them spending time together in a cabin on X-mas in a blizzard) is good, but the thing they occupy their time with isn't convincable. I'd rather suggest them reading books, or having sex, or playing cards, but painting her nails? No way. |