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HelloKittyHater
2009-09-08 . chapter 8
This is a very interesting story, different from the usual SM fanfics.

The story between Usagi and Mamoru is very intriguing. Since the Tsukino's were Mamoru's foster parents, it would mean there is a brother-sister relationship between Usagi and Mamoru, but Usagi has no memory of him...and it seems as if Mamoru sees more of Usagi than a sister. But that's just my thought. lol. Please update soon!
Goddess of the Moonlit Sky
2009-08-29 . chapter 8
Another stunning chapter! I loved it! Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!
JasLine
2009-08-28 . chapter 8
juicy as it go! hope that the past haunt once a while on both of them!

then heal the wound together!
raye85
2009-08-27 . chapter 8
wow...nice chapter. well i have to admit to you that i really like the story besides this chapter. i would really feel bad if mamoru and usagi both ended up getting hurt. as for mamoru i wonder when will he tell usagi that he used to know them when they were younger. plus some how i feel that they will both get hurt when georgina finds him. hopefully they dont
James Birdsong
2009-08-27 . chapter 8
Cool surely *cheer*
mika
2009-08-27 . chapter 8
Nice chapter.Please update soon!
angel313
2009-08-26 . chapter 8
I like it. It is different. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Roses and Diamonds
2009-07-28 . chapter 7
"You act like we’re a gang of secret super heroes searching for clues to solve some mystery. This isn’t some television program guys!"

“We would make a pretty badass team of super heroes don’t you think?”

Haha! I loved it! It's really great. Those lines were just perfect! Please update soon!
SerentiyMoonGodness
2009-07-25 . chapter 7
good chapter~ love the way you see him changing
Goddess of the Moonlit Sky
2009-07-24 . chapter 7
Woo, loved it! This story is awesome!
The Cuteness
2009-07-24 . chapter 7
It's interesting, but I'm confused. Was there an accident before usagi's parents die?
raye85
2009-07-24 . chapter 7
lol... i really like your story. i was reaeding it and got into it...i was ready to click to the next chapter. lol well i am really looking foward to reading it cant wait.
SerentiyMoonGodness
2009-07-15 . chapter 6
good chapter
BloomAmber
2009-07-15 . chapter 6
HA! I liked the ending. "I dunno how to respond to this."
"I don't know myself"

Hehe.:p Great job on this! Continue soon! (oh... graphic design studio... congrats on your achievements! :p)
Goddess of the Moonlit Sky
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
Loved it! This story is so perfect!
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