It was okay, but cliche nonetheless.

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Oh, goodness.
You definitely captured how Jacob would feel, wow.. its.. i really enjoyed reading this. Definitely going on my favourites.

This made me sad.. takes me back to the world before Breaking dawn :groans: where he didn't have to imprint.

That was just BEAUTIFUL.
Back to the quoting!
"If you chose me, the damned motorcycle won’t be standing idle and dusty on my rusty garage."
"If you chose me, you would be here in my arms this minute, feeling my warmth, not his coldness. You would be hearing two heartbeats, not one."
"If you chose me, I wouldn’t be here, trying to get through every minute in my life."
"If you chose me, you wouldn’t be there, about to say your wedding vows to someone else in a few minutes."
"And now you are happy. I could picture it in my head…your radiant smile, your eyes shining in euphoria."
"If you chose me, you wouldn’t be my foolish, silly Bella."
Especially that last line. It got my eyes all blurry at the end. Awesome!!