cute

Loved it...the dialogue was so adorable and funny. You can really write Jake & Leah. It was sweetness ! Keep writing more Blackwater!

Aw, that was really sweet, and funny. I liked the snowball stuff. xD Great job!

Haha this was so funny and sweet!

cute..is it a one shot?

ha ha ha! great job! and i loved the wonderful comments on horrible renesmee (grr, i hate her)!!

Cute! I love it, great job!

Very well-written, I like your writing style. Great metaphors too :P

I think they'd go well together, minus Reneesme :)

Aw, adorable! Good job, it was well written!