I love your voice. It's so profound, so reallistic.

Beautifully...I'm not sure what the word is, but all the pain and horror, and maybe disappointment that it isn't "o" are coming through.

I could see this actually happening. Great job, update soon.

I daresay this was the best part yet. That bit with the statues was very grotesque but I think quite biting. And no, I didn't get to see the fireworks last night- we completely missed the countdown!

Alas.

Another great story though, I find myself looking forward to your story/author alerts in my inbox. Good job! : D

Great, this is pretty good. Profound without being try hard-ish. How many parts are there, and are you planning on continuing? Keep up the good work. (Y)

Excellent. Beautifully heavy and dark, and far more like the aftermath of a battle.

It's good you should continue it. A very good aftermath beginning.

i'm so confused :P but it sounded pretty good. ;)

Its got a lot of promise, this one.