Yay! You posted it! :) Good Job with this 2nd installment. Jon and Cass are gonna reproduce like rabbits at the rate their going... good grief! LOL :) I'm so glad he didn't lose his sight...that would have been horrible. And you got the despondancy and grumpiness right with him, I think. That would be an incredibly difficult thing for anyone to go through, but especially for Jon.

You did a great with this one, and I'm looking forward to more!