Very interesting take on their relationship. That was fun, having them both start out disguised. I do wonder why Snape was still so snarky in this last chapter, though, considering that he wanted Harry so badly. Habit, maybe? Or his way of protecting himself from emotional hurt? Anyway, nice job! Definitely a fav.

Loved it! I liked how you portrayed the emotions, i actually got all angry on Harry's behalf at some points >_<. Great ending ^_^

Awesome story!

I enjoyed this story but feel strangely incomplete at the end. Dunno why... but wow, great story! :D

That reveal scene was... wow!

I bet June, Julia, Jane... erm, whatsherface's real name is Alice or anything not beginning with a J haha

Nice story so far :D

Very interesting! I think your take on HP's life seems more probable than in the books. When I was reading the end of book 7, in the back of my mind, I was like "Yeah right, like there's not 4 million reporters/fans/crazed lunatics hiding out on the Platform, trying to photograph/attack him."

You should do a sequel, I'd be cool to see some of the reactions of Harry's "friends," not to mention, the press.

Well, it appears that Snape is willing to change flavors as long as he still has the basics... Neat chapter!

I liked this story. It's a more realistic and gritty version of a relationship between these two than we normally see. Most people romanticize them until they're unrecognizable. This seems to suit them better. Thanks for writing.

wow today was the first time I read your story it was great. thankyou for such a good story

end?is that it?why don't you write about their relationship?please continue

Harry's actually learned how to do a healing spell? (shocked) And he finally realizes that he's not his father? (double that).

Perhaps he can grow up. It's about time.

Fascinating step forward, though...

Yes, exactly - Harry fed Albus poison on Albus's orders, and he knew that there was a good chance it would be fatal. And the weakness which it caused did contribute to Albus's death, because it left him unable to defend himself. Yet somehow only Snape was blamed.

You've got a slight typo here - "What do you think were you making him drink". Also, I dunno where you are, but "scoot" used like that is a bit of an Americanism...

AHH! Too short, you've left me drooling...again XD

Thanks so much for the update, fantastic fic!

Harry gets himself into this situation all on his on, and then when it turns out to be Snape catching him out in it, suddenly all of this is Snape's fault and Snape being a git. Yep, that's Harry through and through. Good writing.