Dear Jade,

Hi there, this is WolverineIK1973 here, and I've really enjoyed not only this chapter, but the whole story. It is great to see on of the very few stories about the human Guyvers and their adventures beyond the fall of Chronos. I'm especially enjoy the interaction between Sho and Aptom, that will be fascinating to see how it resolves itself, through Aptom's choice.

I've been following this story for a long time now (just as Genzo was once working on Zerebubuth!), and it's nice to see that you've returned to it after such a long time. I desperately hope that you keep on updating it more regularly. In the meantime, thanks for the update and the whole story!

P.S. I believe that Sho is The One, as evidenced by the Guyver's conversations in the first interlude, and why his unit said in this chapter that it would not willingly serve any GuyLord!

nice update can't wait for more :P i hope that the timeline has changed for the tekki, before going back in time i guessing sho wasn't the guyver emperor but i hope in this timeline he is and that he rules over all the different races in one large empire, with the tekki guyvers joining him (it was the emperor in the first timeline he wanted died for some reason maybe he was evil). plz update asap

i just found this story and i can't wait for more XD i still think that sho is the emperor XD plz update asap

Read this all on my e-reader over the last few days. I'm enjoying this a lot, the developments are very interesting! I look forward to finding out what happens next, so far I've been unable to predict your twists and turns.

Agito's methods of dealing with Sho in the earlier chapters, and that he WOULD have to deal with Sho, were something that rang very true to me.

I followed and very much enjoyed this story for a while years ago, then grew discouraged when it went so long without updates. Now I see that it's active once again, I'm gonna have to go back and reread it all to re-familiarize myself with it.

Hello there Jade, my name is Irfan, long time reader, first time reviewer. I have been waiting with baited breath for the continuation of this story, as it seems a natural extension of the Guyver chronicles and the manga. I really enjoyed this chapter, not all the episodes have to have violence in them, even though the Guyver is a systems made for it. Having said that, a little bit of action would not have gone amiss, and also Cereta's action against Sho I would liked to have seen in this chapter; I assume that will be be coming up in an upcoming chapter in the near future. Overall though, I liked the way the story unfolded, and am definitely looking forward to more.

Man I havent been able to stop grinning since I saw you updated this. Its been one of my favorites for years and I love where you are taking this story. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon. -J

amazing story. nice pace. the characters aren't too ooc. i like how you painted them. however, you TOTALLY ruined the image of my fav. member of the hyper zonoid team 5... zektole...please tell me you don't have plans to do something like that with my 2nd fav member thancrus.

i won't whine about the zektole thing, i know there could've been better ways to do it without making him look... gay. but it's the easiest way, but honestly, from my own POV i never noticed zektole acting that protective to elegen. i mean sure, he wanted revenge. but he's just as protective over gyou, no? and he wants revenge for the rest of his team. i just felt like adding my two cents to this. it's not a flame nor a complaint, just my own opinion on the matter.

though i loved how the chapter played out. specially on the aptom part [minus the elegen part -shivers- ...] and you did play agito rather good. calculating, efficient and able to adapt with what little changes that might occur.

though, i have a few questions. i'd appreciate it if you could spare the time to reply to me through a PM if possible:

1- why did aptom just change back into his human form in the end? i mean, he's in the middle of a fight. that sounds ... unintelligent ?

2- is there going to be any chronos related rebellions? i mean, are the zoalords honestly serving agito? i honestly find that hard to believe, but i recently started digging in the manga so i don't know their exact persona and how they think/operate.

3- why would murakami turn to side with agito. i reached the part where he appeared as his alternative persona, and from what it looks like, he's a total alkanphil minion in this personality. any reasons?

4- i know this sounds way fast since i'm only in chapter 2, but are there any potential pairings or mild hints of ones? like for example, [and purely for example purposes] say aptom getting this 'sho apparent death' a bit too serious and somehow gets closer to mizuki? [again, purely for example purpose] or shizu finally kicking it with agito?

5- will there be any new zoalord or artificial guyver processing? [i skipped about 6 volumes or so just to hop to the last two to read about the new guyver 2, the female one]

and yes, totally worth the effort mate. keep it up.

and again, i kindly request a response if it is not much trouble.

Just finished reading chapter 14 and I have to say that that the story keeps getting more and more interesting . Keep up the good work and the story to whatever it will end up. Can not wait to see where this will end up. Thanks.

I have read 7 chapters of your story so far and it has been a good read. Keep up the good work. I do not have much in the way of constructive criticism I am not an authour myself but read quite alot and your story is quiet good. Thank You and hope your muse is still with you and that you have the time to continue and eventually comple this work literature. Thanks again.

I liked how you jumped between the characters but kept each scene important. You are one of the few authors on FFnet that truely shows each indiviual character as different inside not just on the surface. keep writing.

the fluff was good, and even though its been a while, the story picked up very nicely from where you last left it. hope some more chapters are coming soon though, I wanna know who the one is even though i think i know who it is, and who the 'one' sho fights.

The prodigal returns! I have to admit, I NEVER thought I'd see hide nor hair of you again, Jade. :D I have to admit, I was all but ready to give up on this fic entirely. Still, I have to confess that I've almost completely forgotten the plot of this story...

I really loved this chapter, and even though I waited forever for it, it was totally worth the wait, keep up the good work, and here's to another chapter. Or even a few more chapters.

Where is the next chapter of your story?