I liked how you jumped between the characters but kept each scene important. You are one of the few authors on FFnet that truely shows each indiviual character as different inside not just on the surface. keep writing.

the fluff was good, and even though its been a while, the story picked up very nicely from where you last left it. hope some more chapters are coming soon though, I wanna know who the one is even though i think i know who it is, and who the 'one' sho fights.

The prodigal returns! I have to admit, I NEVER thought I'd see hide nor hair of you again, Jade. :D I have to admit, I was all but ready to give up on this fic entirely. Still, I have to confess that I've almost completely forgotten the plot of this story...

I really loved this chapter, and even though I waited forever for it, it was totally worth the wait, keep up the good work, and here's to another chapter. Or even a few more chapters.

Where is the next chapter of your story?

I have but a few words on what I think about this fic...HOLY CRAP!. it is awesome as hell. You have kept me enthralled for 3 days reading through every chapter up till now, please keep updating this beauty that is your story.

Just got done rereading this since this is probably the single best guyver fic I've ever found and is really damn fine piece of fiction in general in any category. Hope you dust it off one day. Thanks :D

Great story i hope you will finish it soon:)

That was great, when is the next update?

This is the best fanfic I have seen. I hope to see more soon!

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This is a very good story which is long but some of the symbal
is very eye catching and sometimes making it hard to read
but i do hope the nxt chapter comes soon though

Just love the characters and the story! Easily one of the best Guyver fics out there. I can not wait for the next chapter.

Your fic is very good.. I've been reading it for a while now. I've read a lot of the other Guyver fics but i enjoy reading yours the most.

nice work, I especially enjoyed the interactions between sho and his unit. However sometimes you use the the wrong word such as 'what' instead of 'that' and you will sometimes use the wrong tense, but I understood what you were trying to get across.