Cute!

congrats on ending this. I really liked it through and through. Kudos for writing it. I really did enjoy the way the characters developped in the two stories. Keep it up

waiting for godot. wow, it's FOLLOWING me ahaha.

yay for the sushi bar scene! it's a very good idea the comparison between the tastes and everything. well, i liked how this started and im glad you got an idea for this. i look forward to reading the next chapter. happy belated holidays.

aw that was a nice ending :)

I love your gravi voice. I had to go back and read "The Scene in the Sushi Bar" after reading this.

I laughed at this line: "and pretending to be dead would probably only slow him down for a while."

I also thought Shuichi's response to the ending of Eiri's story “whatever I want, I want it completely… you know?” summed him up well.

Hope you have a Happy New Year!

*happy sigh* Loved it! Perfect ending, leaving so much open and ready for the rest of the story to take place, this fits in perfectly to the gravi universe. This story made me happy, lovely job!

'But tomorrow was tomorrow, and tonight was tonight. And tonight Shindou Shuichi was simply… irresistible.' - I loved this line & the ending was wonderful!:)

Once again you've created a wonderful 'real' world with our favorite novelist and singer! I was hooked from the first word until the very last and cannot wait for the next chapter. BRAVA!

Merry Christmas Moon! And what a delightful Christmas gift to us, your devoted readers, to find the sequel to "Scene".

Wonderful story, as always. I have to wonder if Fujiko is our beloved manga-ka Murakami in disguise! Interesting idea for a manga there, Fujiko!

Eiri's gentler side is so evident here. I love reading his softer side. His describing his story so willingly to a rapt Shu is one of the sweetest scenes I have read.

Of course, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't keep us in suspense too long!

Happy Holidays to you and yours and have a Happy New Year!

'The womanising, the macho attitude, the flash cars… it all suggested some sort of overcompensation,' - Too true! I love your method of character analysis through the eyes of another character. And your Shuichi is giving me a toothache, but a *good* toothache, the kind you get after consuming heaps of delightfully sweet treats. :)

I love you. I so seriously love you for this. *glomps you*

For some reason, Yuki being "taken aback" really got me. I could see him in my mind being surprised and I loved it!

Ono is so cute! I really like her. :D

And there's more to come - YAY! *glomps you again*

This was absolutely great, I'm so glad for this sequel! Thank you for this chapter and I can't wait to read more! You write such a lovely Shu, I always fall a bit in love with him after reading your stories...