I LOVED this chapter, Dawn is awesome! Good for Draco as well. You did Umbitch really well, I can't wait for more!

How about Draco let's Snape know what Umbridge did?

GO DAWN! hehe. draco. Post more soon!

Nice. I never liked Umbridge anyway, she's the one lying and she knows it.

Sounds great so far, except that on your profile, I noticed you hav this story on twice.

Good start!

good chapter, love the remus/dawn interaction. update soon!

Madam Malkin shouldn't have been so judgemental though I see why she would be. I'm glad for a Remus-Dawn bonding experience.

-Supernaturl Goddess

post more!

great idea. my guess is that the father is conner? i hope buffy finds out soon and is super supportive, i always got the idea that she would never want to repeat her mom's mistakes (kicking her out season 2 end)and shoo family away. can't wait till dawn starts hogwarts! update soon :)

Dang, I hope Mrs Weasley didn't like that vase she dropped. Or hopefully magic can make it as good as new without any cracks. *lol* I can't wait to see what happens next and everyone's reactions to the news. I also can't wait to see what Snape's reaction is going to be when he find out his youngest niece is pregnant and how he handles the news...

I liked the chapter. Hope you update soon.

cool story post more!

I wonder who the guy is. I hope it's not Spike but that's just cause I'm a Spuffy fan. Update soon please.

Interesting. I think that I'll add this to my favorites. One question though if Joyce was two years younger than Snape and Dawns two years older than the trio wouldn't that mean that Joyce would have had her when she was sixteen and Buffy before that. Correct me if I'm wrong. Can't wait to read more.