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deitarion/SSokolow
2009-10-09 . chapter 3
Interesting. Never seen someone say "Google Earth Mark 2" would be the end of the statute of secrecy before.
tangentsferret
2009-07-04 . chapter 3
Hi. Just found your stuff by way of Wordhammer's "Favorite Authors" page, and I really enjoyed this story. I see it just had an update in February, which is a hopeful sign that you haven't stopped working on it. Yay!
Smut's not my favorite thing to read, so I'll just be giving some of the stories a miss, hope you don't mind. The non-or-minimally smutty stuff has been very good so far: you have a nice feel for writing viewpoint so that the reader gets the "feel" of being in the viewpoint character's head.
I've been saving the "Big One" for last. I love epics. Hope yours measures up to the standards you've set so far!
Thank you for writing!
WBH21C
2009-05-15 . chapter 3
Good one!
knitchick
2009-04-18 . chapter 3
Harry Potter's harem, every man's dream.

You have peaked my interest, so I will be looking forward to how this turns out.

So there's Hermione, Daphne, Angelina, Katie, Lavender, Luna, Pavarti and Alicia... that's eight. So who is number nine?
Susan of Hannah?

Good start to the story!
padfoot'smoon
2009-04-11 . chapter 3
I am inordinately fond of this story. I hope for an update soon.
The only thing I didn't like about it was the whole Dobby scenes. I just don't find the physical humiliation and name calling as entertaining as the whole Harry-with-his-Harem thing.
jojobevco
2009-03-30 . chapter 3
Good Story
The Submarauder
2009-03-24 . chapter 3
Intresting story - but who are HArry's wifes? I gathered Luna, Hermione and Daphne Greengrass, maybe Katie Bell, Angelina Johnson and Alicia Spinnet but the others?

Keep up the good work.
darklordmike
2009-03-22 . chapter 3
An interesting way to work modern technology into the Potterverse. Google Earth would indeed be a problem, wouldn't it? This overlap between the muggle and magical worlds seems to be becoming a specialty of yours, and you're good at it.

If you choose to redeem Snape here, my only suggestion is that he be made to go through some truly hideous (and funny) embarrassments first. And it would be nice to see more harem action, perhaps a flashback showing how Harry acquired all his girls?

Anyway, nice work.
AnimeFan101
2009-02-25 . chapter 3
I know exactly what you mean about the Google Earth deal...freaked me right out a few weeks back when I pulled up the street-level view and right there was my freaking car parked at the curb.

And a very rational explanation for the danger found there - after all, perception of the thing you're trying to hide seems to be what the various charms and such in JKR's Harryverse seems to hide, so a non-living thing would not be affected whatsoever.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
SomeGuyFawkes
2009-02-24 . chapter 3
Clever. Thanks for the update.
Mede
2009-02-21 . chapter 3
Wow. How Big Brother... without all the paranoia and personal violation and et cetera. And with the warm happy Christmas card greetings. :)

Very cool. It was interesting enough in the first two chapters, but now you've expanded and transformed the whole world they're in, not just Harry's future. I definitely want to read more. How/why Harry hooked up with those eight girls, who exactly Clan Black consists of, how common such polygamy has gotten, how well it works... and, of course, what happens to Snape. And how he handles it. :) Update soon please!
Firehedgehog
2009-02-20 . chapter 3
please continue
Jimm
2009-02-19 . chapter 3
Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
librarywitch
2009-02-19 . chapter 3
Thanks for another chapter in this very interesting story. I am so loving it. Well done as always. I love Google Earth, my grass wasn't cut however. Oh well, it will update soon!
Wonderbee31
2009-02-19 . chapter 3
Hmm, nice section here, and really look forward to what each of the ladies send Snape as a job offer and what the final outcome will be.
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