Hey - I like this.

You kept Dally in character. He's. . .different, but still, well, - Dally. You know? I think the setting's a bit vague, but I like it better that way. This is just a little glimpse from a person we hardly know, and how she sees Dallas. It's really. . .original.

I loved the last line - a perfect place to stop, I think. ;)

Happy holidays!

very nice. The imagery was excellent, and yeah, who doesn't lust after Dally's back...

:-)

I liked it a lot. It's nice to see Dally from someone else's point of view. I liked the last line.

I don't have much time, so I'll keep this short. I like this, a lot, simply because it's Dally through another person's eyes. The perception was interesting, and I think that it was very real. I like how you said, "She used to think that she’d find better than Dallas Winston," and it meant two different things.