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UndeadZombie 3/12/10 . chapter 1
Hahaha! I love you Claire and Your wide vocabulary! Your so smart! I atually know Claire so, Everyone else back away! Hehe. Anyway I love Shuujarou! He's so Cool Do your writers know he's Bi? You should write persona! Jk! That's Mine! But I'm writing right now so, I'll send it to you! kk? It's going great so far! And thanks to you I can write pretty good now! Well...see you in School Monday! Heehee! Toodles, Love!

Mandy-Chan
Some Random Tosser 2/20/10 . chapter 9
Oh my god, it's been so long. I can hardly remember what happened...

Nice chapter! I really hope you update soon! (sapped of all critcism strength). And Haiso and Noboru are in character.
huali 2/17/10 . chapter 8
Ame's here! WHOOT xD

so I just kinda realized how marysue-y she is... *facepalm* so you can change her anyway you like if it makes her sue-ness any better. Gosh, I'm such a hypocrite, hating on sues and having one of my own XD

I like the twist you put, kidnapping :D I wonder what's next
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 8
last two lines were wonderful. 3
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 7
XD i knew Shuujarou would have hormones at some point
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 6
Oh I hate the internet sometimes. ...

well

if i had submitted a character, i wouldnt have been mad

good chap though xSilverwingsx
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 5
Poor Kyuui

She misses him... I am a fan of that pairing now
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 4
“Whatever, Aka—look at that squirrel!”

I love airika XD XD XD
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 3
I loved this chappie.
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 2
Oh, poor Shuujarou-kun. I like him.
junojanai 7/21/09 . chapter 1
I would send a character bt I am so bad at making them
seccaberry 7/21/09 . chapter 8
YAY! You finally updated! :) Hehe But I might be a little late with this so... sorry bout that.. hehe BUT YAYAY! Shuujarou and Akane forever! :D Nice chappie! Very emotional. Shuujarou was gettin' kinda emo there at the end... :( Oh well... PLEASE UPDATE! Please! Before the evil cupcake men get me! Thankies! :D

Seccaberry
XxXChiharu-Chan-1000-SpringsXx 7/21/09 . chapter 8
Heh, when I saw that you updated, I squ-ee-ed really loudly. Everything was just so suspenseful and just... sad and romantic at the same time. Kyuui man. I don't like her that much either. XD Pro'bly because she's coming in-between Akane and Shuujarou. Akane's view of Kyuui tickles me. Akane acting like a bitch *nodnod*. XD

Shuujarou/Akane is just like heaven for me right now. Dude! Airika is just such a beast! XD When I read that she was in some kind of battle or something, I'm just like... T_T she was fighting! XD And I squ-ee-ed again. XD Haseo is so saracastic. XD The ending of the chapter... such fluffyness, Sil. XD

The last two lines were epic. XD I'd write a Shuujarou/Akane oneshot it was so epic. XD We should do like a one-shot trade off... uh, if I write Shuujarou/Akane, it will, most likey, be angst filled. XD And smexy. I wonder... we need to catch this guy/guys who are messing with everyone in the human world!

Nice chapter, Sil. XD
CO Raven 2/19/09 . chapter 7
Oh my, I can't believe I forgot to chack up on this for so long. Its nice to see you updating.
Arcana Force XIII 'Thanatos 1/26/09 . chapter 7
Wow, sorry for the late review. I've been kind of busy lately. I liked the chapter and the characters. Masato was so cute. Good job and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!
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