 Wolviezchick 2009-10-17 . chapter 2this is soo, soo adorable ;) |
 Raniatlw 2009-01-04 . chapter 2Another great Daniel/Betty story! Great work! |
 TeeFly 2008-12-24 . chapter 2Very cute, and very OMG how adorable, it is very realistic too, come to think of it that would be a good season finale you know, Daniel/Betty kiss and then don't know what to do and so they do nothing...but you know one day they will...:)
Love it! |
 TeeFly 2008-12-24 . chapter 1Very well written, very realistic, very adorable, okay so basically I totally and completely just LOVE it! |
 Goshikku Seirei 2008-12-24 . chapter 2Aw. (: A waiting Daniel is pretty okay. (: BECAUSE HE WILL ACT ON IT IN A FEW HOURS. Hahahahha. just kidding. Thank you for this Detty piece. It's a nice treat for this Christmas. (: |
 AndromedaAiken 2008-12-24 . chapter 2You captured their relationship excellently! Great job! Update soon! |
 emmasmum 2008-12-23 . chapter 2YOu are just going to HAVE to "finish" this story and give us the "for now" part really soon.
Great story. Great writing, great all round really.
Please - continue the story. |
 dettyfan90 2008-12-23 . chapter 2Aww man, why'd the lights have to go back on?? XD
That was a great read for me, it was nice to see how they got to that point in time when they were in his office all dressed and staring at each other. I really loved it and I hope u write more great stories! |
 didi6 2008-12-23 . chapter 2Great storie, whrite soon!
You should whrite a sequel! |
 AndromedaAiken 2008-12-23 . chapter 1Where's the kis?! =D Great job! I loved this story! Just wished you had written about the kiss too. =D |
 Slayer Scribe 2008-12-22 . chapter 1Darling it's rather darling!
I'm very excited to see a bit more...
great Betty by the by. |
 emmasmum 2008-12-22 . chapter 1Great story, please another chapter before xmas
Keep the the great writing and characterisation. |
 girlgamer112 2008-12-22 . chapter 1 Love it! This story is so well written! I loved how you switched perspectives from Daniel to Betty. I cannot wait to read your story tomorrow! =) |
 Alimard 2008-12-22 . chapter 1I love this story and the time break-downs that you did. I can't wait for the second chapter. |
 FanSel 2008-12-22 . chapter 1looking forward to know what happens in the darken office...aka update soon! XD ;) |