Needed cheering up today, and this has done just the job. Thanks for writing. Really delicate and beautiful. Lovely characterizations too. Thanks D

Oh, this was great! Good job, I loved this. (:

this is soo, soo adorable ;)

Another great Daniel/Betty story! Great work!

Very cute, and very OMG how adorable, it is very realistic too, come to think of it that would be a good season finale you know, Daniel/Betty kiss and then don't know what to do and so they do nothing...but you know one day they will...:)

Love it!

Very well written, very realistic, very adorable, okay so basically I totally and completely just LOVE it!

Aw. (: A waiting Daniel is pretty okay. (: BECAUSE HE WILL ACT ON IT IN A FEW HOURS. Hahahahha. just kidding. Thank you for this Detty piece. It's a nice treat for this Christmas. (:

You captured their relationship excellently! Great job! Update soon!

YOu are just going to HAVE to "finish" this story and give us the "for now" part really soon.

Great story. Great writing, great all round really.

Please - continue the story.

Aww man, why'd the lights have to go back on? XD

That was a great read for me, it was nice to see how they got to that point in time when they were in his office all dressed and staring at each other. I really loved it and I hope u write more great stories!

Great storie, whrite soon!

You should whrite a sequel!

Where's the kis? D Great job! I loved this story! Just wished you had written about the kiss too. D

Darling it's rather darling!

I'm very excited to see a bit more...

great Betty by the by.

Great story, please another chapter before xmas

Keep the the great writing and characterisation.

Love it! This story is so well written! I loved how you switched perspectives from Daniel to Betty. I cannot wait to read your story tomorrow! )