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Wolviezchick
2009-10-17 . chapter 2
this is soo, soo adorable ;)
Raniatlw
2009-01-04 . chapter 2
Another great Daniel/Betty story! Great work!
TeeFly
2008-12-24 . chapter 2
Very cute, and very OMG how adorable, it is very realistic too, come to think of it that would be a good season finale you know, Daniel/Betty kiss and then don't know what to do and so they do nothing...but you know one day they will...:)
Love it!
TeeFly
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Very well written, very realistic, very adorable, okay so basically I totally and completely just LOVE it!
Goshikku Seirei
2008-12-24 . chapter 2
Aw. (: A waiting Daniel is pretty okay. (: BECAUSE HE WILL ACT ON IT IN A FEW HOURS. Hahahahha. just kidding. Thank you for this Detty piece. It's a nice treat for this Christmas. (:
AndromedaAiken
2008-12-24 . chapter 2
You captured their relationship excellently! Great job! Update soon!
emmasmum
2008-12-23 . chapter 2
YOu are just going to HAVE to "finish" this story and give us the "for now" part really soon.

Great story. Great writing, great all round really.

Please - continue the story.
dettyfan90
2008-12-23 . chapter 2
Aww man, why'd the lights have to go back on?? XD
That was a great read for me, it was nice to see how they got to that point in time when they were in his office all dressed and staring at each other. I really loved it and I hope u write more great stories!
didi6
2008-12-23 . chapter 2
Great storie, whrite soon!
You should whrite a sequel!
AndromedaAiken
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Where's the kis?! =D Great job! I loved this story! Just wished you had written about the kiss too. =D
Slayer Scribe
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Darling it's rather darling!

I'm very excited to see a bit more...

great Betty by the by.
emmasmum
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Great story, please another chapter before xmas

Keep the the great writing and characterisation.
girlgamer112
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Love it! This story is so well written! I loved how you switched perspectives from Daniel to Betty. I cannot wait to read your story tomorrow! =)
Alimard
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
I love this story and the time break-downs that you did. I can't wait for the second chapter.
FanSel
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
looking forward to know what happens in the darken office...aka update soon! XD ;)
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