Excellent writing and good idea on having both of them fail at the same exact moment. Yeah for Optimus street racing for once. He's too serious and overworked for his own good. Would love to have seen the traffic cameras recording a Peterbilt truck flying down the road. Keep writing.

freakin awesome!

Well, that was interesting. :) Just kidding it was pretty freakin' helarious.

Oh, I love this! The second bet in the end has me laughing! That's so funny! They'll just keep betting and betting...One HAWT night is going to come out of all that! *fans self*

This was cute, sweet, fun, and sexy all in one! Chromia was totally cracking me up:)

Is there going to be more to this? I want to read those incredibly hot nights they are going to have together;)

o.o *blush*

that was awesome! Just once I think it'd be pretty cool 2 have Elita the big time uke xD

Ah, that was sweet. Thx. Nice picture of Optimus in mudd...and in the shower in his protoform. grr. Hehe. Well done! Thanks so much. Guess that means I'd better get my aft in gear and finish yours.

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Oh so funny, a little pradictable though, and a bit longish... BUT SO FUNNY!

this does not suck! this was awesome. it was really cute XD

That didn't suck at all! It was brilliant! I was grinning like crazy when they started teasing each other like that :D It was even funnier that Chromia, 'Hide and Roddy started trying to help him out.

Like I said, this was awesome, good job! :D Merry Christmas...

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Happy Late Birthday optimus prime 007!