I think you did a great job with this. Keep up the awesome work!

love this story, really fits in character

i thought it was kewl beans! _

Poor, poor Lupin. I just recently fell under the, haha, spell, of Harry Potter...and I love him so much! The insanity of becoming a monster was scary...but really well-written!

Remus losing his humanity was beautifully written. But damn if your not an emo. :P

I loved the gradual loss of himself as represented by the faltering thought. Great job!

Very good