Another good chapter.like reason clark move across Metropolis and not have Clark and Superman/Red Blue Blur appear in Metropolis at the same time and Clark telling Pete and Lana his secret and has his dad die because that is an important part of the mythos to me and use parts Lex Luthor Tall Tales. Keep it up and I keep on reading

this was a great read.I am a big fan of clark kent as superboy and I hope you do more stories similar to this. I'm a writer to and I try to make good stories but I can never do it like you. the way you make it flow using my favorite silver age and modern age stories and use your own original ideas inspires me to write to.thank you!

Great stuff S.Shield - the first person narrative works really well, and the story unfolds, step by step revealing more about Clark right up to the concluding line.

Thanks.

Well S-Shield...you done it again! Excellent work once again. I have loved Superman, Superboy and Supergirl since forever. And now you have come along and brought a whole new sense, feel and reality to the series. Great work and please keep up the good work!!
Jim

Just joined this forum today because I read this story. I am 54 and from many years since I was 17 I had read every Superboy, Superman, Action, Adventure, Superman Family etc. I could get my hands on. about 20 years ago, I had acquired a collection of what I remember to be over 1500 books. At that time, living in Toronto, circumstances dictated I had to let the collection go. A comic book store on Queen Street bought the whole lot. I hadn't read another until this story. That you S-Shield...you brought all those stories back to me. Plus given insight to the boy of steel with flavourings much akin to the Smallville series. I loved it and look forward to reading more of your stories.