 Skymouth 2009-09-17 . chapter 1I think Gos would be more supportive of her father and LP becoming romantically involved. After all, she does love her dad and LP is like a big brother to her. She probably would be taking advantage of the situation to the best of her abilities. She's never really insulted them to their face either the way she did LP. Sure she does issue her snide take on things, but she never out and out insults them.
I do hope there will be even more fluff, if you catch my drift, later. Those two are so cute together! Interesting ideas so far and has a bad feeling about DW, the pain, and the Negaduck thing. Hope LP doesn't get his big ol' heart broken! |
 pamelana 2009-09-15 . chapter 10I like this story a lot Not just because you give DW/LP some much needed attention but the idea is really creative. The connection between the world and Negaworld is cool. I love NegaLP liking Negaduck and Negs being all "eww, feelings" |
 good story xavier11@fusenet 2009-09-15 . chapter 10 when are you going to put chaptert 12 up because i want to know whats going to happen to darkwing and how did he get sick and if gosalyn is going to take care of her dad and this story is geting to be good keep up the good work |
 Cheezey 2009-09-15 . chapter 10I liked this chapter from Negs' point of view. The scene with Nega-Launchpad was great. I almost want to see them actually get together in some twisted way, even though that's a trainwreck of epic proportions, haha!
I also get a kick out of the irony of Megavolt, who can't even remember to rob the right store, being more observant about Darkwing & Launchpad than Negs himself. Looking forward to more! |
 Vaporshi 2009-09-14 . chapter 10I like the contrast between LP and Nega-LP's confession. Negs doesn't seem the type to really accept that news well ;) Feelings?! Augh! What are those?
Also I laughed at the scene with Megavolt... I love how he's just so casual and ever-so-observant about DW and LP, and Negs was just completely clueless. I think that's pretty much how it would go down. |
 Vaporshi 2009-09-13 . chapter 9This is such a unique plot, and it's something I never really thought of before. I'm so glad you're writing it. I'm really interested as to where this will go! |
 damonika2009 2009-09-13 . chapter 10Oh damn! I knew Negaduck would find out! |
 good story xavier11@fuse.net 2009-08-12 . chapter 9 when are you going to put chapter 10 up because i want to knwo whats going to happen to darkwing and if he is going to be ok and how did he get sick and is gosalyn going to be in the next chapter and this story is geting to be good keep up the good work |
 good story xavier11@fuse.net 2009-07-16 . chapter 9 when are you going to put chapter 10 up because i want to know whats going to happen darkwing and if he is going to be ok and if gosalyn is going to lose her dad and how did darkwing get cancer and is he going to be ok and this chapter is geting to be good and keep up the good work |
 Cheezey 2009-07-16 . chapter 9Fun chapter! Poor Bushroot, I'd flinch at being doused with weed killer too if I was a plant-duck. It'll be interesting to see where this goes now that DW knows that Negaduck is sick too. |
 Cheezey 2009-06-11 . chapter 8I liked this chapter a lot, and all of the interactions in it. I'm wondering what will come of the fire. Negs definitely won't be happy. Also, the comment about Megavolt and Quackerjack acting like an old married couple was funny! |
 GOOD STORY XAVIER11@FUSE.NET 2009-06-10 . chapter 8 WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT CHAPTER 9 UP BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND I CANT BELIVE GOSALYN SAW HER DAD AND LUCHPAD IN BED TOGETHER AND I HOPE DARKWING GETS BETTER SOON AND I HOPE GOSALYN DOESNT LOSE HER DAD |
 wolfyfox3 2009-06-07 . chapter 8the part with QJ and megs was too funny! |
 damonika2009 2009-06-07 . chapter 8That was so sweet. The ending of this chapter was funny too.! I'm glad Gos is getting used to Drake and Launchpad being together. |
 Cheezey 2009-05-25 . chapter 7I haven't seen many Drake/Launchpad stories that kept my interest, despite liking the pairing, but I've really enjoyed this one thus far. I love the twist with Negaduck suffering the same illness as DW (and the quip he made to Nega-Launchpad about never being that drunk again was golden! XD), and the contrast between DW and Negaduck in the same situation. Also, since I'm a huge Fearsome Five fan I'm thrilled that you've given the other F5 boys supporting roles in this. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go! |