Brutal. I liked it. No update for awhile, are yuo going to continue?

I had to reach far back into my brain to recall the characters, but your dialogue was great.

I don't remember anybody getting shot in the face, or getting killed by explosive arrows in the cartoon, but that is what makes fan fics so good.

Plus, I like bad guy stories.

Nice work.

For the love of God, PLEASE keep this thing going. I'm sorry to say I'd almost forgotten about it because the updates had stopped for a while.

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Please do continue. Hopefully, you'll make it an exciting adventurous story, something JOE fans, like myself, like. So, yeah, work on it. Get Snake Eyes, Storm Shadow, and Scarlett involved, PLEASE. I love them. Good luck!