Love the structure and the 2P POV. Great story!

I LOVED this story. You are probably one my favorite writers. Ishida is so different but yet he still has his smart-alic personality at the same time. BRILLIANT!

Can you say amazing? It's really a wonder that such an amazing story has so few reviews, but I suppose that's what you suffer when you write for such a small fandom. You give a much different portrayal of Ishida here than I'm sure many of us are used to and I know I, for one, rather appreciate the change. You have a very unique style, exemplified by you're use of second person. (I really must try it someday, seems interesting. ^ ^)
Keep writing!
~justanotheryaoifangirl

I loved this one...but i felt it was way to short. i think you have very fluid writeing skills and should keep on writeing. I also like your point about no rape sceans. :)

Can't believe the lack of reviews for this story. I really enjoyed how short and sweet you kept the story. And even though the idea Ishida would ever let Hollow Ichigo do that with him so willingly is hard to believe; I can also understand why you wrote it the way you did.