Very good short. Hakkai is definitely my favorite character in Saiyuki, so it's always nice to see stories centered around him.

HAKKAI IS SO AWESOME. I lold. Awesome short here.

You spelled Gojyo wrong.

out of all of them i have to say Hakkai is the one i would be afraid to piss off ! i laughed my ass of at this. good work!

I don't usually leave comments, but I felt the need to leave one here. I love this story. The end made me laugh. You did a great job. :)

Some-body's in trou-ble!

HAHAH! I love Hakkai when he's so mad all he does is smile and then just rips into ya in a very pleasant way.

Nicely done.

*Squeaks* Oh man! Poor Gojou. Though I have to feel for Hakkai too. He always did have to deal with Gojou's shit. Good one shot!

I do love ultra-polite Hakkai. I really had to laugh at the charming way it was to wake up... and then Gojyo's far rougher summary. Very nice.

Cute conversation! Hakkai's scary when he's mad. :)