Great story! It's very sad!

Aw, jeez! Made me want to cry.

I love it. It's great

What a fabulous and foreboding little moment. I love the angst and the idea that Carson was perhaps haunted by his own upcoming death. Beautifully written and so sad as always.

beautiful story

Wow. What an interesting look at their relationship. I like it a lot, seeing as you don't get to watch hardly any of it in the show, but they certainly must have had a friendship! Teyla and Carson are a lot alike in their calmness, their compassion, their tact and perceptiveness concerning other people. The ending is ominous, of course, and the whole thing carries an undertone of sadness. But I like that she takes his hand, and that he reciprocates-very in character, especially for him. :) I like this one a lot; it's very quiet, personal and very well done.

Sad, but nicely done. Teyla and Carson always had a special relationship.