hmmm, is there supposed to be more to this? I think it's missing a bit at the end. there is more posted on other sites. (love this story, btw! so cute!)

So sweet...I want a Fred

aw that was so cute ]!

Beautiful story! Loved it so much.

Nice smooth flow to the text and lovely character portrayal. And I just love Fred and Angelina!

Aw, that was so sweet! You didn't go on overkill with the romance either, which is good because tons of people do. I love this!

-P.G.

fred what? but very good and in character. me gusto mucho.

I love this story! It was one of the first F/A stories I'd ever read and its still one of my favorites. Great job on keeping them both in character!

Was this a oneshot? i think it was brilliant and it should have more! yeah! keep up the good work!

-Fb

hello ! i'm a french girl. I love your story and i translated it .i wanted to know if i could publicate it on

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thank you in advance for answering me :)

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Tell me there is more. This is a wonderfully maddening story. Great job, and I love the way you built anticipation. Would love to read more work from you!

These two are too cute for words. Though Angelina never did find out about Bagman...

AH! so cute!

i love it! please tell me where i can find the other chapters. thanks nugey

Nice story i really like so much so keep up the good work!

i read this ages ago and thought that i reviewed it...:...ah well.

anyway, it's a classic! i love it! it's beautifully worded and they're deliciously in character...(don't ask about the frivolous adjectives, i feel like being a little fruity!)