You do a great job of writing Demyx, and Xigbar too. I'd love to see the continuation you have planned.

And when I read the part about "‘thinks he’s the shit’? Okay, then he knew who had written that." I was definitely laughing out loud. XD

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THIS IS SO AWESOME. The inside jokes make me LAWL. Shoot you in the foot...out of love, Ax, out of love! This makes me SO HAPPEH. I can only hope my Xmas gift to YOU makes YOU as happeh as I am now!

Oh. Oh, I like this a lot. I would go on about it but I'm being kicked off.

Definitely want more though (and more Axel too, he's great even though he's just been mentioned. XD)