Please write more!

Aw Where'd Ed run off to? Leaving Win-win all alone in that big house...
This was a good chapter and I can't wait for the next one. You've done a great job with this story!

this is really good!

very interesting story, it's different from the usual 'Ed & Al come back with restored bodies and stuff happens' plot. Yay, go EdxWinry! ^_^ But I feel bad for poor Al, he never got that blasted pie... good job showing a guilt-ridden Edward, by the way. The M-rate hasn't been backed up by anything yet, but something is brewing here...*evil chuckle*. Khem, anyway, the sad thing is that I'm going to do something I hate most whilst reviewing: writing notes on grammar. I'm not sure if you've noticed or not, but you keep writing "starred" instead of "stared". It was a bit confusing at first ^^" a few punctuation errors, but those are probably typos, they're easy to find if you'll be going through your text again, editing. Other than that, keep going! =))

awe so sad! but i love it so please update soon!

Gah, you must continue! He has to come back! O_O

update soon!

This is a good story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.

AWW NO ED!! GO BACK!! Is he gunna go back, soon? D: ... o or maybe something bad will happen to him... or he'll get worse!! bwahahahah! Dang, I'm sadistic... XD anywho, can't wait for more ^^

I love this story Deathberry! You must update this story soon. It's my life!

YES YES YES! Continue! I love this! Please oh please continue!

OMG nice chapter. I really love this story and I was wondering when you where going to update it. And I would really appreciate it if you continued your story cuz it is really good. To me at least. I can't wait til the next chapter if there is one that is. Anyways Awesome chapter and good luck with your writing

You should keep an eye on your proofreading. Badly proofread sentences give unfortunate meanings. For example:

"Her feelings for Ed had defiantly enraged since he arrived at the house, however her conscious had told her to push those selfish thoughts aside, and that her duty was to morn with him for now."

Because it was poorly proofread, this sentence actually means:

Her feelings for Ed had stubbornly become more angry because he came to the house, however her state of waking had told her to push those selfish thoughts aside, and that her duty was to the first part of the day with him for now.

You actually meant:

Her feelings for Ed had definitely inflamed since he had arrived at the house, however her conscience had told her to push those selfish thoughts aside because her duty was to mourn with him for now.

I am enjoying this! I hope you do continue.
It's interesting to see how Ed would react if Al didn't come back with him.
Nice job, and I only saw a few typos, so nothing to worry about =] x

lovely story! You should continue it SOON. And did you really have Al dead? X(