Very good. Well written.

Quite an interesting alternate universe you have here.

A great story. Very well written.

nice idea to put the usual characters and situation in a completely new location

woua! it's great!

this is so good

wow. a little confusing but good.

I liked it, its good, but there is a little problem, you put your fic as it were in spanish and certainly it doesnt, just change that, well keep writting.

P.D: my english is not as good as I wish, sorry