Interesting! And very well written. I assume Sirius feels so much hatred for Ginny because he's projecting his own self-loathing onto her? (You sound too intelligent to be one of those people who dislike a character and then get so wrapped up in hating them that they have to twist the canon into something it's not or insert things that make no sense outside of the context of their own minds, just to avoid being disagreed with by the source material. :P So as paranoid as I am about these things, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt.) It's a pity you don't give us any hints of what's in it for her, though, or some other background info. The fic as it is makes it very tempting to fill in the blanks myself, but there is *so much* missing that the feelings between them just stop making sense alltogether. Too much of a good thing, you know?

Still, it was a nice and stimulating read. ^_^

I surely liked this!
I have to say that I loved the final dramatic part when Sirius thinks he's failed both Harry and James (I think too that Ginny and Lily were really similar, well, I like to think that).
And your style is really good, great job!
I hope Alina liked it and I also hope to find a sequel of this oneshot.
Bye from Italy,
Birba

this is unbelievably fantstic
I love this odd mixed up premise
and the ending
with Sirius's self betrayal
is just so very sad
kudos

My god that was BRILLIANT! Just wow.

I wasn't going to read this at first because the summary didn't seem so good... but once I started... I just couldn't stop.

The characterizations were bloody brilliant. Ginny... well... I can see her shagging Sirius... as a way to be closer to Harry... but there is something more to it.

Just wow.

How did Harry die by the way?

Another work of art from you.

But it feels two sentences two short.

I don't know waht I mean by that. It's missing something, but what that something is, I can't figure out for the life of me. Maybe if I get some sleep I'll figure it out.

And maybe the story needs to be missing something to feel complete. Yeah, i think that's what it is. It needs to be missing something, like Sirius and Ginny are missing something.

By the way, your dislike of Ginny is showing...

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... I'm so confused. And it really looks like a twisted relationship. Obviously, but hm...

Could you write Ginny's point of view? Because I don't understand so many things and the story feels a bit like a snippet of a dream that you vaguely remember when you wake up and quickly flees your mind as your day goes on. Don't you just hate it when that happens? But, there are a lot of loose ends that weren't resolved at all and maybe my questions aren't really relevant to the story but I feel amazingly curious about it all the same.

My questions are:
How/Why did Harry die?
Why is Ginny always naked when Sirius wakes up? Did they have sex the night before or something?
Why is Sirius still staying in Grimmauld Place if he's allowed to be in public?
Did their relationship start while Ginny was still with Harry and would that be part of why Sirius is feeling like he betrayed Harry?

Wow, that was long. I did enjoy the story, if you were wondering. Thank you for writing.

Very well written.

Very nice... Another version of this could be Ron/Hermione...

Darling, of course I adored it. It was brilliant, as I knew it would be. Only you could write the devastation that is Sirius/Ginny. I would love for you to continue it, you certainly understand Sirius deeply. You're amazingly generous to lavish the slightly odd pairing fics on me. Can't wait for more stuff from you. Happy Holidays or Merry Christmas or what the fuck ever :P and again, thank you, dear.