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kupo12
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
dangitt T.T i thought there was gonna be a lemon scene in this one T.T -which you dont see very often-...T.T wah...in my pov, roxas seemed colder than he usually is >.> but thats my opinoin...>> whee~. are you gonna make one..? o.o
Aly-Cooper
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
OMG YOU FINISHED. :3 Huzzah~!

lol, I enjoyed this so much I had to keep myself from... well lots of things actually xD Well, staying in one spot, getting a grip on myself, trying not to wake up my dad, keeping my little cousins away from things I don't think they're ready for yet xD, um, also- -is smacked-

Okay, I loved it to make a long ramble short~ x3

To tell ya the truth, I think you live in New Zealand so... yes, I would be on the other side of the world from you xD -subtly hides boots- ...what? -shifty eyes- x3

-takes a much needed breath- I think in my excitement while reading this I gave Sami (my grandparents' dog) quite the overpetting... -stares at pile of dog fur on the ground and coughs- I mean I almost laughed outright when Axel came home all innocent-like (if it weren't for my dad sleeping right behind me... >>;)

Roxy's such a devil~ >; I'd be pretty mad too. ...but its AkuRoku xD Can't go wrong there~

...well, unless its like...really bad spelling and grammar and its something weird -will not speak of this anymore due to a warning of possible brain cell loss coming if I do so-

And the ending xD "Karma Bitch" LOL This fic is even better than I imagined. Then again, my imagination usually acts on impulse... Whatever. I think of it as a Christmas present a bit since its so due to Christmas even though you said you'd do it in...eh, what was it? January of this year? I dunno. Don't care xD Its here.

The hot chocolate made it~!
Insanecat6
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Hah! Roxy got payback on Axel. I think he desevered it, after all, I know how Roxas feels. I've never lived anywhere cold and it would be a real bitch to have to walk to school in the cold. I had been wondering why he was fiddling with the sharpie before hand. Love to you for the story. Merry Christmas. Bye.
Zomeister
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
aw! you updated! yay! I wouldnt have kicked you anyways =P
good story I liked it and cant wait for the SephRi one!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!

love you!
Melii Aile
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Haha, loved that last line. XD

This was great, I really enjoyed it. =]
theauthormistaken
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved it.

"Karma Bitch"
Genious i tell you, genious.

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