aw! adorable! I love this

wow! this is epic

wow, Aid, and I am guessing that the Twins have made an apperance.

hope your writwers block gets better soon

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME. All three chapters.

Very funny and cute. Makes much sense all through.

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(Sorry for bad english, from Japan)

now that ending was such an aw moment. hope the next chapter has the twins and blue. awesome chapter. keep up the good work. update soon please.

Cute. First Aid doesn’t get enough attention if you ask me. I rather like how you came up with Ratchet's throwing habit as well, poor Jazz. Only one thing got to me, most of the spelling was all accurate, but you were miss-using a lot of words. If English isn't your native language you were doing quite well with the tenses, but I must recommend a beta reader. There is a beta bar in FF, but if you can't find anyone for this fic, I will gladly volunteer. Keep up the good work.

KAWAII! I so do hope you continue. You Leader Line was amazing, I hope you make a sequel to that too eventually.

Well done. I can't wait to read about the Twins and all the others.

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CDW

EXCELLENT! I read both fics in one sitting and I like it very much. Some typos in some words confused me (English isn't my native language and well... I don't live anywhere near the U.S Un.n), but the fic was awesome. I'm looking forward to read more chapters.

Here, ò.o your cookie! EAT IT! O

TAKE CARE!

MISAO-CG

i read your other story too. they are both very good and i'm really enjoying them. but you have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in both. can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work. update soon please.

aww that was cute

Ratch has a youngling

and apperently Hide now has the twins lol