flame you? well i would...but I can't seem to find anything wrong with it...

and your story is sooo cute! i love it... and if you made another chapter i would love it more?

awwwwwwww I liked it! My little brown eyed mistake.

WOW! HEHEHE He loves her awww! I wish I could write as good as this at 1:00 AM

That was really sweet... good job! :)

That was awesome. It was short but DUDE! that said a lot. You are an excelent writer. I give you two thumbs up and if I was a mutilated freak, I would give you four! _

Hey that was very touching and I say it has 2 thumbs up*

this is not that bad

UUUUUughh why can't I write such good story's?

That was be-*Burst out into tears* BEAUTIFUL! IUVED it it was soooooooo wonderfull! You have great talent keep writeing!

Pan-chan

cool!...i thought this was really good!...:D

so sweet! honto sugoi :)

is this a one-shot, or r u gonna continue? I hope you continue!

awww...beautiful, just beautiful.

I liked it. You are going to write more right?

A bit waffy but nice all the same!

I've put your work as fanfiction of the week on my site! Congratulations!

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