Oh, I wish this meeting would actually happen! Along with Yachiru meeting Nel. Though when you consider the recent manga, that might actually happen... Anyway! Very good job!

wow, that was really in depth. really deep analysis by shinji, that was really good. i'm very impressed, and the point about him seeing aizen as scum and momo loving him so they didn't see what was underneath and most important, amazing. shinji saying he wasn't a good captain, but aizen was, man, that really was on the spot. great job :D

-eulamarie

M... I love the parallels, each coming at it from the other side. Very nice.

Wow...flowing perfectly :) And everything seems to be...well...perfect!

Very interesting monologue. I never gave much thought to what Shinji would tell Hinamori if they were to meet.

Well written as usual. No gripes whatsoever.

Oh, wow. That was amazing. Very insightful. Brilliant. I never thought of those two being similar, but when you put it that way, they kind of are.

*gasp*
i LOVE shinji!
and this actually sounds like something he would say
most of it anyway
teehee

So sad, but lovely. :3 I loved it.

Wow, this fanfic is GOOD! I think Shinji and Hinamori-san could relate a lot... The only question that presses my mind is if Shinji would declare Hinamori his "first love"? *laughs*

As usual, I post my favortie quote/bit of writing from the story. THis was the bit I liked the best.
"Ukitake with his coughing and his being so damn understanding, Unohana with that smile of hers that went right under the skin . . . "

Yes, that sounds EXACTLY like those two. ^^ Very good description of the both of them! ^^

I'm adding this to my favorites!!