 Erin87 2009-01-01 . chapter 3Great! Made me smile as much as the other chapters did. A lot. : ) Wonderful sense of family there. Excellent story! |
 shez 2008-12-27 . chapter 3 great story o loved it |
 Blueninja33 2008-12-25 . chapter 2Good story so far, but I must admit that the part of me that's McKeller is upset about Ronon kissing Jennifer. Other than that. Good stuff! |
 Erin87 2008-12-24 . chapter 2Very good story so far! It really got me laughing, still have a smile on my face. Love the first chapter too, really sweet and nice. Merry Christmas! : ) |
 cflat 2008-12-23 . chapter 1Nice one-shot! I liked the SG-1 video to Sam. |