A great story. Very good.

I've never read a Narnia fic before, and I really enjoyed this one! :)

this was wonderful! I always wondered what happened to Susan, and I love that you added the movie version along with the book version, i think susan was explored as a character better in the movie version.

I'm glad that she was reunited with her family.

That's wonderful. I love how you portrayed her, not as the superficial person I imagined when I read about her in the Last Battle. Very nice job.

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Lovely. It's good to see some fixion for Susan... and I must admit, I'm kind of morbidly curious to see how they handle it in the movieverse (assuming they get that far).

You've beautifully made Susan.. well, Susan, instead of the image that I got of her when Peter said that she'd 'forgotten' Narnia. Also, it's so well-written that I may have believed that you were C.S Lewis, if he hadn't died in the 1960's. All in all, it's a very inspiring oneshot. :)

Sable

I loved this. In particular I loved this:

"Edmund was a rock behind him, already having weathered so much to make him strong."

Beautiful characterization of Susan, but also of the other characters.