Very cool.

This was a really good story! :) Excellent Job. :)

I love your Fran so much! And do you know, when you write Fran I love Dom even more too. He's more of a real person through your Fran's eyes than anywhere else, ever, including the moments in the show where he grins at Fran when she agrees to go with him and when he looks up from his book in a corner booth the morning Casey comes down to open and asks him about Jarrod. I love you :)

that was so adorable! I absolutely loved it! It was way cute and well written. Good job.

Love it!!

This was so cute. I think you really got Fran and Dom's relationship and how it flowed from when he got there. I loved when he left his book for her and the picture, and it was all so cute. I could see it happening in the show. You did such a great job with this.