this is great!

Wow, very deep and very moving :D Wonderful! You've created a very interesting past for these two characters. Thanks!

Oh Please...Please Please...Write more. It was a lovely story. I hope that they get reunited really really soon. Murdock is my most favorite character of the A-Team. Sooo Please write more soon.

Thanks,

Flight O'Fancy

Excellent writing Becki! I'd like to see her come back and talk to him. Murdock is my favorite A-Team member and I really enjoyed your story. I also know how hard it is to post your first efforts! Good job. :)

Ohhhhh. . . . ::sniffs:: sweet . . . and sad, darn it! ::Rummaging in the desk drawer:: where did I put them Kleenexes? . . . This was so lovely, I'm glad you decided to post it. I love a star-crossed romance. (I love it even better when the "stars straighten out" and the two get re-united.) I do so hope you'll continue to write . . . and I wouldn't say no to a sequel! ;D double thumbs up! - Skybright