What a beautiful story! It's rare when I come across a good citronshipping fic - I've read your other fanfictions (which were all just as beautiful, by the way), and although English is not your native language, I wouldn't be able to tell that from reading your stories! The grammar and sentence structure exceeds from a lot of the other YGO stories you see here. I actually found a mistake however; you used the word 'found,' instead of 'fond,' when Bakura states that he's getting "rather fond of Malik." Otherwise, I spotted no mistakes.
The plot is well constructed; I adore your usage of the cat metaphor to apply it to Malik (if, that's what you mean), and the two were in character, which is a plus. Malik's inner thoughts were so human, it's hard not to think that his thoughts could be based off of a regular human being's.
The dialogue between characters was fluid as well, and I rather enjoyed watching Bakura and Malik interact. The kiss was a nice touch, and not overly cheesy either.

In all, I loved the story. In fact, I adore all your stories. It's a shame that your stories are so underrated - at least, compared to other YGO fanfictions here. I mean, six reviews for this masterpiece? It's disappointing.

I'm looking forward to reading all your future works, and I hope you continue to be just as wonderful of a writer as you are now!

Loved it.

Just the sort of thing I'd expect from you. As good as always! :D There were a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, but it had very little impact on the story itself.

Huh. So you aren't going to add more? Please do.

This is perfect. :)

I loved it :)
i loved the cat metaphor to, i could never think of somehting like that xD

Yay, Citronshipping! There are too few of those around, and it's such a wonderful pairing...

I liked that a lot, a really nice long read that made me feel warm and fluffy...

So...the cat was used as a representaion of Malik's coyness, right? Just wanted to make sure in case I was having the wrong impression... And Yuugi as the heir? My mind just can't wrap itself around that idea...