I think it was beautifully written, you are a great writer. I love Don and Danny together. Lindsay is just not right for Danny ,but Don is. :) I could believe they are soul mates or spiritually connected. Great job!

hey hey yet another great story! I loved it! Merry Christmas!!

V. interesting, neat story, the no quotation marks thing didn't bother me at all! They are so cute together, and I like Don being a king and Danny being a vikiing, it's adorable!
Happy Holidays!