I've been reading the other reviews you've gotten from people wondering what's going on in this fic, and I would like to say reassuringly: I do understand what the story's about. It's a very eloquent and heartrending one to tell. I love the way you tied the two stories together, and you have marvelous word choice, especially in the quotes from Mira Whitlock's relatives.

Just wondering: did you intend the paragraph about Harry's change in eye color to switch from first person into third person?

Anyways, this is the kind of story to which I'll find my thoughts turning randomly over the next few months. It's one of those thought-provoking ones :).

I liked the way it was written, the two stories were intersting...

So, was it just a dream?

can you explain how the two stories relate and the dreamalis?

I enjoyed the Harry/Draco parts of this but am confused as to what the heck the 'Dreamalis' thing is? It's possible that I'm being really dumb, but I just don't get it.

Good fic! Though... I'm a little confused how the two stories relate ( the regular one and the one in itlaics). was it just a dream?

this is really good although i dont quite get it

what was dreamalis and what did it do?

and also was harrys relationship with draco just a dream or was it real?

im really confused /

um...huh? very well-written overall, but i...don't exactly get it. harry was only dreaming his only relationship with draco?

Lovely if a little heartbreaking. I must say I hope that the end is ambiguous for a reason and that the fact that I was a bit confused was not the fault of my feeble brain.

good fic!