Hmm, not bad. Yes, Xelloss IS evil, after all. _ And hey, your poem even rhymes! Wow.

Hey anything with Xell and lina is a great fanfiction

NICE ONE!

What do you know, I amazingley think you can write.

that was cool! _ what wonderful rhythmatic schemes it had! D love the work!

. Ano, that was jozu.

OOOOO! Very cool! (..um...kind of sounds like me and just about every other villian in anime, including Xel-sama...*drool*) I like it!

The Insane Tracy Inside My Head: ...why DO you like just about every villian in anime? It's never the good guys, never the good guys...

What more needs sayin', Lina-chan? You always hit it on the head. Persevere.

Wow, I like this. Its very nicely written! It was a really nice poem. Keep up the good work

OOH I LIKE! I LIKE! Yay! Lol this was good ... I attempted at writing an Esca poem and well ... it's moderate I suppose ... Your's is alot better than mine! OOH I LOVE XELLOS! YAY CrimsonFire

_...cute

That was good! I liked it (oh and by the way i think you're right about the whole anti-poetry sentiment thing)

The reason I reviewed again was cause I wanted to know who was saying that she was foolish. Who was it?

*jaw drops to the floor* that is THE best poem I have ever read! O_o It's amazing what you can do with rhyming words...(personally i dun usually like rhyming because it reminds me of justice and the sugar princess' cavity causing speeches but this was GREAT!

I like poems. By the way this was a very good one I believe it could be made into a very good story

Anyway I'll look for more of your work

Very nicely done!