Diagnosis: unknown degenerative disease… extremely potent … all tests negative … no cure available … no treatment available … estimated maximum 5 months of survival … death imminent.
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So, does this mean that Kazuya will come and gouge Jin's eye out, and then Jin will have to either evolve or die?
OK, if you haven't read Spider-Man: Evolve or Die, then just ignore that. You're such an ambitious writer, MM: it's good to see this kind of drive and creativity still exist in the world of Tekken fanfiction! Keep at it: I'll be waiting eagerly!
Hey ho. Read the sixth tournament thing you did, but dind't review because I didn't have an account. Still, I'm glad there's going to be a sequel. Nice first chapter, though I'm not totally sure where about's it's going to go. Oh well, still, good start. Can't wait for more. Thumbs up to you, and happy holidays
I just knew that it was coming! I JUST KNEW IT! (lololol abnormal intake of sugar...)
So, yeah. More of fluff in this chapter, as well as Jin's struggle to ask Xiao "something"...
I love the interaction between the characters (I freaking love the HwoLili bits), most especially Hwoarang wiring his motorbike and the displaying-to-the-whole-world-what-Jin-and-Xiaoyu-are-doing. And Leo in a dress... -wishful thinking-
M.M., I'd like to apologize again if I kept on rushing you and stuff... But this is great! I CANNOT wait for the update. -raises UPDATE banner- But still, take it easy! (I'm not good at persuading...)
I was rambling again! Anyways, this is a great start! Ö