Oh yeah, you should go for that other one-shot. You are amazing at writing Ventress. In the movie and half-hour shorts, she is simply an assassin and sith apprentice, here you give her definition and shape/form. It is something she sorely needed in a well defined Star Wars Universe. Amazing job. Keep writing!

I wasn't able to hear Dooku's dialogue here spoken by Christopher Lee. Good characterization means good speech patterns, I think-however, he didn't say anything that seemed out of character.

The description of the tatoos and Ventress' thoughts on them was very interesting. Fascinating concept, and well executed. Again, the level of detail is impressive.

I don't want the war on Rattatak to finish, I'm making a killing there in the arms trade. An interesting little drabble.

Good story! A grammar mistake or two, but wonderful plot. : )